Tell me is my poem good and should i display it on myspace??

so here it is...and be brutally honest ok...

i have a high tolerance for pain

but still thats no excuse

to treat me the way that u did,

i just couldnt take that abuse

im sorry im not pretty enough

for you to stay faithful to me

and im sorry that i believed all those lies,

believed what u said we could be

every word u said was a lie

and everything we did was too

you told me that u loved me,

and of course, i believed you

ill never believe u again

how could i have been so dumb

you're just not worth this much pain

im through with u we're done

i hate you so much

and everything that you say

and i even hate your touch

so please , just go away.

comments please...is it good??

Tell me is my poem good and should i display it on myspace??

yes

Tell me is my poem good and should i display it on myspace??

Not that good of a poem but writing is a good way to relieve anger which it seems like you have alot of.

Tell me is my poem good and should i display it on myspace??

I love it! This is what i'm going through, can I display it on mine to?

Tell me is my poem good and should i display it on myspace??

that was so touching

PUT IT ON MYSPACE girl.

Tell me is my poem good and should i display it on myspace??

Sure it's good but if he's really not worth it why bother displaying it on Myspace for everyone to see and know about what happened? Obviously you're trying to get a reaction out of him so he'll respond. The best thing to do is leave it completely alone.

Be the bigger person and drop it completely.

Tell me is my poem good and should i display it on myspace??

Your poem is not good - because you are displaying signs of low -self esteem. sorry I am not pretty enough - never say that - also dedicating a poem to a person on your space shows you are still hung up over him. it's evident you want him to see it and feel bad. Also the person who angers you controls you - while you are seating being mad, writing poems, thinking of ways to get him back, he has went on with his life, and probably won't even see your poem. And if you ever take him back, he won't take you seriously.

Tell me is my poem good and should i display it on myspace??

It is really bad, it is one of the worst thing I have read that has been passed off as poetry.

That said send it to your ex and move on. your point is clear and the one that needs to read it is the ex, and not your friends on myspace.

Tell me is my poem good and should i display it on myspace??

Yes you should posted it on myspace. It was touching.